meaning...?
Perhaps i could write
something that would mean something to someone.
Perhaps i could write
something that would change your mind.
Would you?
Would I?
* * *
Trees bloom and grow while war rages on
undisturbed they converse with the sky
as fanatical men rage and die, their plans as nothing
while trees grow steadily in peace.
something that would mean something to someone.
Perhaps i could write
something that would change your mind.
Would you?
Would I?
* * *
Trees bloom and grow while war rages on
undisturbed they converse with the sky
as fanatical men rage and die, their plans as nothing
while trees grow steadily in peace.
posted by Timmay!! at 3:33 PM
9 Comments:
Unless they're chopped down.
Then the trees rise up and revolt against man!!
Interesting!!!!
change who's mind about what? cryptic methinks!
grrrr 'whose' (secret bad punctuation hater)
Hmm, deep :)
Jen - have you read 'Eats, shoots and leaves'? Fantastic for grammar OCD people ;-)
I love the poem Tim,
It sort of makes me feel like despite the madness and heartache in the world - some things just keep on growing and living and breathing... like the tree and also like God's faithfulness.
Don't know if that was what u meant but - it is very powerful
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ya get me
yeh kate, that kind of thing. Glad somebody caught it!
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